How di I improve my product description?

[Christopher Graham Parish]

I have 2 new products, both of which are have " Product rating lowered for bad description"

I think I have followed all the guidelines - help would be much appreciated.

Am I allowed to list the products here so you could see them?

[Paul Anscombe]

Christopher Graham Parish:
I have 2 new products, both of which are have " Product rating lowered for bad description"

I think I have followed all the guidelines - help would be much appreciated.

Am I allowed to list the products here so you could see them?

no you cannot list them here.

you have far too many headings in your descriptions 

[Christopher Graham Parish]

Paul Anscombe #:

no you cannot list them here.

you have far too many headings in your descriptions 

Thanks

[Eleni Anna Branou]

Christopher Graham Parish:
I have 2 new products, both of which are have " Product rating lowered for bad description"

I think I have followed all the guidelines - help would be much appreciated.

Am I allowed to list the products here so you could see them?

Also you don't have descriptions in other languages.